Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it's a good idea to copy celebrities?

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It is argued that a lot of people imitate their favourites celebrities from various media sources like television and magazines. The potential cause of

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is that people emotionally attach themselves by the celebrities,

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my opinion it is not good idea.

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, people emotionally attached their life with the favourite celebrity like their daily routine, gym, car etc. Most of the youngsters spend their wealth in copying their special star.

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, in India a majority of the youth are losing their focus of education and trying to enter the entertainment industry because they

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want to become famous like their loved actor or actress.

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, they waste their crucial period of time and lose focus from their career path.

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, in my opinion, it is not a good idea to follow others habits. The life which we see on media is different from the reality. They

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have to work hard daily to maintain their position in the entertainment industry.

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by following their favourite idol some people get success in the career, but not everyone will be successful. So people need to take a wise decision in their life what they want to achieve rather than just following the entertainers.

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, a recent survey by the Times of India shows that 40% of the young population comes to Mumbai just by following their celebrities.

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, without any proper planning they have to struggle a lot in the city. In conclusion,

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of copying famous celebrities people should focus on their own goals and try to work towards them.

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Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it's a good idea to copy celebrities?

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