Many people think that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Zoos are considered to be beneficial in the preservation of endangered species. While there are some who think
this
is true, others believe that keeping animals enclosed in a cage is
inhumane. In my opinion, animals should be free to enjoy the natural habitat, which they were meant to, in the Suggestion
are
first
place.
Admittedly, Zoos are important as animals facing extinction are protected from unfavorable
environmental conditions brought about by human activities, not encouraging or approving or pleasing
unfavourable
such
as deforestation, and mining .
Accept space
.
In other words
, these organisms are able to access clean water, as well as good air. For example
, certain specie of fish have lost
their existence because of water pollution Suggestion
has lost
cause
by waste from oil. Suggestion
caused
Although
, it may be thought that taking them from their natural habitat would have been unfair, their extiction
no longer active; extinguished
extinction
wouldnt
be a topic of discussion today if they were kept.
would not
wouldn't
On the other hand
, aninimals
are subjected to a life which is unnatural to them when kept in cages. a living organism characterized by voluntary movement
animals
This
means that there is no freedom to move around, interact with the environment, and explore nature. For example
, birds which are meant to fly, and hunt for their own food are confined to very small cages. However
, in my opinion, this
is highly degrading, and unfair, as these animals also
have feelings, and wants, thus
, subjecting them to confinement may result in depression and illnesses, which results from lack of exercise.
To conclude, despite the minor benefits of collecting endangered creatures and keeping them safe in zoos, they deserve the chance to be free to search for their meals, and enjoy the wonders nature has to offer.Submitted by dessiejay000 on
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