Many people think that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Zoos are considered to be beneficial in the preservation of endangered species. While there are some who think

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is true, others believe that keeping animals enclosed in a cage

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inhumane. In my opinion, animals should be free to enjoy the natural habitat, which they were meant to, in the

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place. Admittedly, Zoos are important as animals facing extinction are protected from

unfavorable

not encouraging or approving or pleasing

unfavourable

environmental conditions brought about by human activities,

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as deforestation, and mining

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, these organisms are able to access clean water, as well as good air.

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, certain specie of fish

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has lost

their existence because of water pollution

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caused

by waste from oil.

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, it may be thought that taking them from their natural habitat would have been unfair, their

extiction

no longer active; extinguished

extinction

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would not

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be a topic of discussion today if they were kept.

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,

aninimals

a living organism characterized by voluntary movement

animals

are subjected to a life which is unnatural to them when kept in cages.

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means that there is no freedom to move around, interact with the environment, and explore nature.

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, birds which are meant to fly, and hunt for their own food are confined to very small cages.

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, in my opinion,

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is highly degrading, and unfair, as these animals

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have feelings, and wants,

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, subjecting them to confinement may result in depression and illnesses, which results from lack of exercise. To conclude, despite the minor benefits of collecting endangered creatures and keeping them safe in zoos, they deserve the chance to be free to search for their meals, and enjoy the wonders nature has to offer.