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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The cases of
abortion
 are increasing all over the world, making
this
 one of the most controversial and debatable topics. While many, including myself, would argue that
abortion
 must be legalized, others are against it.
This
 essay will discuss both views and explain why I believe
abortion
 should be legal. Those who are against the legalization of the
abortion
 argue that even in the early stages of
pregnancy there
Accept comma addition
pregnancy, there
 is already life formed, and for
this
 reason the
abortion
 would mean the killing of a human being. Studies have shown that the fetus begins to develop from the
first
 week of
pregnancy
.
Thus
, to those supporters,
abortion
 would mean the destruction of an existing form of life.
However
, others, including myself, believe the
abortion
 should be legal giving women the ability to choose. Sometimes the
pregnancy
 is a result of rape and sometimes the woman is in an abusive relationship. In either case, if a woman feels that she does not want the baby, she should have the freedom to terminate it. Over the years, there has
also
 been an increase in the number of women who do not want babies. In my opinion, only those women who are able to raise their babies in a healthy and loving environment should give birth. Bringing a baby into
this
 world knowing full well that you cannot give it a healthy and happy childhood is a bigger crime than killing it in the womb. For these reasons,
abortion
 should be legal all over the world. In conclusion,
abortion
 remains a highly controversial topic with arguments both in favour of and against it. In my opinion, women should have the right to terminate a
pregnancy
 if they do not want it
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