You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear
Mr.
Mike,
I am Vishal, living in one of your luxurious furnished apartments in central London; I recently took it on rent. I am writing Change the punctuation
Mr
this
letter to drag
your attention Correct your spelling
draw
towards
Change preposition
to
furniture
placed Correct article usage
the furniture
in
the balcony, Change preposition
on
that
is broken from the left side and there are a lot of scratches on the top of the coffee table. We are being told by your realtor that Correct pronoun usage
which
apartment
is fully renovated and the furniture placed in Correct article usage
the apartment
flat
is new and he Add an article
the flat
a flat
also
informed us that maintenance is covered by the owner.
Since, we are from the
South Asia, which has usually warm weather. My parents are here for the summer holidays and they pretty much use Correct article usage
apply
balcony
in the morning time. I would like to request you, kindly replace it with new at Add an article
the balcony
earliest
. I can understand as per the agreement, the landlord is responsible for it, I am sure you claim it from the insurance company later on.
Regards,
VishalCorrect article usage
the earliest
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.