In major cities around the world, traffic congestion has become a serious problem. How can this problem be tackled? Give reasons and examples from your own experience

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is one of the most difficult questions to be answered. Reflecting, on my personal life, the

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inspiration came from a hospital visit to India, where my grandmother was diagnosed with cancer and she had surgery. I met a few nurses on the ward who were looking after my grandmother and they were very caring, compassionate, supportive, and helped us to explain everything very briefly what will happen after surgery and what kind of care she will need. I saw nurses in every aspect of

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from admission to the theatre. It was my

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visit in hospital as I have not been to the hospital before, but

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visit blows my mind,

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I make my mind to pursue my profession where I can interact with different people, support them, and can cure people directly. I got supportive family they support my decision to change my career from a bio-technologist to a

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. Another factor that has encouraged me towards nursing is my inclination towards

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and my subject knowledge. Since childhood, I was more fascinated by the body systems and how it functions. Later, with advancing age and academic career, my passion for helping people, spreading

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knowledge started integrating with studies related to

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subjects. What, I realized nursing as a profession can help me in continuing my passion. I saw nurses specializing in a number of areas, including oncology, Scrub/ Scout, Anaesthetist, cardiology, neurology and many more. I knew as a

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, there would always be more to learn, and nursing is not confined to one area as it offers a multitude of paths. These two factors played a crucial role in my decision to pursue a career in nursing and to be a

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. After 1 year, I got admission in USQ,

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the course work was very hard for me, but I was motivated to study hard as I could, knowing that the more, but later I seek from USQ library and my friends help me to achieve my goal. Many of my friends have asked me why you didn`t opt for a master’s in biotechnology as your profession rather than nursing? Undoubtedly, bio-technologist plays crucial roles in the medicines sector, but the amount of time a

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gets to spend with patients is imperative. To be their voice and advocate for them was my motto, and I am happy I am moving in the right direction. In my view, nurses are silent healers and probably the

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to the family who knows the patient's care needs very well

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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In major cities around the world, traffic congestion has become a serious problem. How can this problem be tackled? Give reasons and examples from your own experience

Fully explain your ideas

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to stops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: what are the changes what are the problems you are facing what part of the service would you like to change

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?