In major cities around the world, traffic congestion has become a serious problem. How can this problem be tackled? Give reasons and examples from your own experience

This
is one of the most difficult questions to be answered. Reflecting, on my personal life, the
first
inspiration came from a hospital visit to India, where my grandmother was diagnosed with cancer and she had surgery. I met a few nurses on the ward who were looking after my grandmother and they were very caring, compassionate, supportive, and helped us to explain everything very briefly what will happen after surgery and what kind of care she will need. I saw nurses in every aspect of
healthcare
from admission to the theatre. It was my
first
visit in hospital as I have not been to the hospital before, but
this
visit blows my mind,
then
I make my mind to pursue my profession where I can interact with different people, support them, and can cure people directly. I got supportive family they support my decision to change my career from a bio-technologist to a
nurse
. Another factor that has encouraged me towards nursing is my inclination towards
healthcare
and my subject knowledge. Since childhood, I was more fascinated by the body systems and how it functions. Later, with advancing age and academic career, my passion for helping people, spreading
healthcare
knowledge started integrating with studies related to
healthcare
subjects. What, I realized nursing as a profession can help me in continuing my passion. I saw nurses specializing in a number of areas, including oncology, Scrub/ Scout, Anaesthetist, cardiology, neurology and many more. I knew as a
nurse
, there would always be more to learn, and nursing is not confined to one area as it offers a multitude of paths. These two factors played a crucial role in my decision to pursue a career in nursing and to be a
nurse
. After 1 year, I got admission in USQ,
initially
the course work was very hard for me, but I was motivated to study hard as I could, knowing that the more, but later I seek from USQ library and my friends help me to achieve my goal. Many of my friends have asked me why you didn`t opt for a master’s in biotechnology as your profession rather than nursing? Undoubtedly, bio-technologist plays crucial roles in the medicines sector, but the amount of time a
nurse
gets to spend with patients is imperative. To be their voice and advocate for them was my motto, and I am happy I am moving in the right direction. In my view, nurses are silent healers and probably the
second
to the family who knows the patient's care needs very well
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