The efficient functioning of society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that the community works well in an environment where there is a strict rules and regulations imposed on them.I strongly agree that, if the people were given a free will without any limitations,

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there would be a lot of issues faced by the law-abiding individuals of the society.

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, the law formed by the government to be followed by the citizens is to reduce the crime rate in the country.These illegal activities increased due to no strict punishment of the crimes they indulged in

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which leads them not to fear to continue the same.

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, the cases on behaving unethically on women is rising day by day in office due to the no proper code of conduct followed by these organisations.If these laws were not imposed among the people,

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there would be no fear in engaging in these criminal activities and

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affecting the community.

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, the act of giving more freedom to do anything they like to do will make the human being to cross their boundaries without knowing the impact on the result of their action.

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, if speed limit and installation of the camera in signals are not implemented in the roads

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people tends to drive rashly without any concern on pedestrians and

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leads to a number of accidents.

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, countries which are underdeveloped which has a flexible judiciary system to easily get rid of their illegal activities which makes them to continue their action without guilt. In conclusion, the increase in the number of individuals turning into criminals And

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creates threats to innocent peoples' lives.So the jury and their punishment should be effective for the community to function properly without any impediment.

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