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Many people try to find a balance between their work and other aspects of their life. However, few actually achieve this. What solutions can you suggest?

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It is an undeniable fact, that working tirelessly has become more popular in todays world, in order to achieve heights.But, as Newton says for every action there is an equal and opposite reaction.
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, individuals get bonus, recognition etc. For their sincerity,
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 life balance has become a huge issue.
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 essay will discuss the cause and how to tackle both personal and professional parts equally.
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, It is up to the individual to stick to a schedule.
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, if the company wants you to spend 8 hours a day stick to that.It is okay to extend your working hours every now and
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, working past the required hours is not always necessary.Companies enforces various policies so that the employee cannot
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 more than the maximum
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 hours.
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, hospitals has 18 hour shifts policy for duty nurses and the system will lock them out, if they exceed it.They need a compulsory rest of at lest 4 hours.
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 is done for the betterment of the nurses' health and for the safety of the patients. Majority of todays
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 is desk jobs.
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, people became obese and
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 cause a major concern in their overall health.
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 is because, we fail to concentrate on our personal betterment.So, it is important we find time for some sort of physical activity.All companies make sure they have a gym, swimming pool, playground and many other activities, which encourages employees to a healthier lifestyle.It is
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 vital that we spend enough occasion with our families. Most of the employers offer two weeks of paid vacation to all the employees, so that they can have their private life. It is important for the individuals to make use of these facilities. To recapitulate,
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 life balance can be improved by working for the required time, leading a healthy lifestyle, making sure to get ample rest and by using the company facilities and the policies to the fullest.It is up to the individual, making sure that all the above mentioned factors are being followed for the betterment of one's growth and his/her family.Having a well maintained personal and professional balance will make one's growth much more enjoyable, whereas it is just a ticking time bomb
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