Advantages and disadvantages of spending free time.
Nowadays, free
time
has become a part of everyday life. Free time
is a time
in which person
uses this
free time
for their personal use or some kind of work which they are willing to do, again it depends from person
to person
. As there are many pros and cons of spending free time
. Let's discuss this
.
Firstly
, In the 21st century, these day's spending free time
is very important for all of us and with the help of free time
one can do lots of new things. A person
from different age category should spend at least some amount of free time
for themselves every day. Spending free time
is more crucial for each and everyone. There are many advantages of spending free time
, like for example
: - 1) Spending free time
can help us to develop our mind and help us to concentrate on a particular task or work which we wanted to do. 2) Spending free time
can also
help us in terms of mood changing and to feel relaxed.
Secondly
, each and every term has pros and cons and spending free time
has many disadvantages also
. Spending free time
cannot be beneficial for us too, but it can also
ruin our lives if we spare more free time
. Spending free time
also
has many disadvantages like, for example
:
- 1) Spending the most amount of free Accept space
:
time
become us more lazy. 2) Spending the most amount of free time
cannot help us to focus on the task.
Lastly
, to conclude, spending free time
is very important for all of us, but we all should spend free time
in the right way.Submitted by jay tank on
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