Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the 21st century, nowadays purchasing a different variety of products, appliances and various things is becoming more and more famous these

day

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's. Due to the vast development in the technology, people these

day

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's are willing to do shopping from

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internet

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the internet

because of many various advantages or it could be due to various cheap rates.

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, in today's world, people are more reliable on "

INTERNET

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OF THINGS" means people are more dependent on

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internet

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the internet

for each and every purpose whether it is related to chatting with different people, using

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internet

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the internet

for entertainment purposes or it could

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relate to shopping purpose

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. Shopping on

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internet

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the internet

these

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's are becoming more popular and convenient, because of may be of its cheap rates and people are

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willing to buy

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this products

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this product

these products

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only. Purchasing things like books, air tickets and groceries are becoming more popular. There are plenty of advantages of doing shopping from

internet

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for example

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: - 1) Doing shopping on

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internet

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the internet

is more efficient and you get various amounts of different products. 2) You don't have to bargain at all because have large selection different prices.

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, online shopping companies like Amazon, Flipcart and other various companies are generating huge amounts of money by selling products online with many various advantages. Yes, it is true that buying things on

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internet

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the internet

is more convenient and it has

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very less amount of disadvantage like

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: - 1) getting of wrong products at the time of delivering. 2) Delivery charging are higher

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then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

purchasing products offline. But at

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last

the superlative of 'little' that can be used with mass nouns and is usually preceded by 'the'; a quantifier meaning smallest in amount or extent or degree

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problem happens very less.

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, to conclude shopping of various products or things are more convenient for the people these

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's because of the many advantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:

convenience
time-saving
wide selection
competitive prices
discounts
accessibility
global marketplace
availability
fraud
scams
lack of
physical interaction
personal experience
impersonal
customer service
delays
delivery
return process

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