Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With many momentous factors contributing to overall economic
growth
, people’s opinions have differed as to whether economic development is the most crucial objective or other aspects that need to be considered equally. While there are some valid arguments for economic Use synonyms
growth
being the most essential target, I am of the opinion that many kinds of improvements are equally necessary to a nation.
There are some conspicuous reasons why economic Use synonyms
growth
is widely regarded as a fundamental goal for countries. Use synonyms
Firstly
, there is a high strong probability that a buoyant economy creates new Linking Words
opportunities
job, an abundance of skilled labours, and better levels of salary for all citizens which advocates raising people’s standard of living. Suggestion
opportunity
Secondly
, with a large sum of money earned, the government Linking Words
credits economic
progress with the improvement of social welfare and infrastructure. Accept comma addition
credits, economic
For example
, the government would invest in traffic networks, hospitals and its education system.
Despite the preceding arguments, I agree with those who argue that other aspects need to be appreciated as equal to economic Linking Words
growth
. Industrialization, modernization, mineral and resource extraction are fields having dominant influences on Use synonyms
environment
, Suggestion
the environment
healthy
, and social order of humans. It is numerous factories that attribute to air pollution, Suggestion
health
this
is mainly because industrial activities create heavy smog eliminated directly into the air. Linking Words
Moreover
, contaminated water accompanied by air pollution will affect not only health Linking Words
humans but
Accept comma addition
humans, but
also
flora and fauna if people use the water and the vegetation, absorbing polluted water in activities daily, which might cause serious diseases. Linking Words
In addition
, increasingly more industrial companies are discharging toxic chemical waste into rivers, causing death to schools of fish and other aquatic animals. As an illustration, in 2016, sewage of Formosa company, concluding phenol and Linking Words
xyanual
toxic combined with iron Suggestion
hydroxide which
was discharged to the sea, caused an inordinate amount of fish death living along seashores from Ha Tinh to Thua Thien Hue province and losing of Accept comma addition
hydroxide, which
fishermen job
.
In conclusion, a healthy economy is Suggestion
a fisherman's job
fisherman's job
the fisherman's job
fisherman job
obviously
a vital element contributing to a country’s success, but social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.Suggestion
obvious
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