Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, in almost nations, advertising has gained popularity in the hectic life. Some suppose that
this
trend
has positive impacts, others tend to oppose it. From my perspective, I still suppose the benefits are
overweighed
overcome, as with emotions or perceptual stimuli
overwhelmed
drawbacks. Far from being advantageous, the negative impacts of advertising on our society should be mentioned.
First
, several advertisements mislead customers
to purchase
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purchase
their commodities which
sometimes does
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sometimes do
more harm than good in some or the other way. Today, since fast-food made of detrimental ingredients are not healthy, consuming them can put
human's
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human
health in jeopardy. In fact, fast food
are
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is
also
typically high in fat, sodium, and
sugar which
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sugar, which
can cause serious health issues
such
as obesity, diabetes, heart disease or even cancer.
Second
, when customers cannot resist the temptation of
merchandises
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merchandise
which are advertised beyond customers’ expectations, there is every likelihood of them to purchase luxurious products which may be unnecessary.
This
trend
could be seen as a waste of budget because audiences are manipulated to follow the latest
trend
to achieve higher status, ending up with irrational buying decisions. There are,
however
, some dazzling advantages that can easily overshadow the disadvantages of a barrage of advertising.
Firstly
, in competitive market advertisements
play
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plays
a significant role in flourishing the economy in almost nations. From the viewpoint of manufacturers, a well-advertised product without advertisement may have difficulty launching in the market,
thus
, advertising is the most effective tool to spread that effective features or information to the target customers. Plenty of evidence suggests that luxurious brands on a mass scale are marketed by the method of mass persuasion through advertising and there is a dramatic sharp in turnovers of modern businesses. From the viewpoint of consumers, people are bombarded with a wide range of purchases.
This
trend
has functions that enable them to informed be informed new information
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about
products at ease, which can save a great deal of time when people chase chasing brands.
Secondly
, in the social view, advertising is capable of providing new
opportunities jobs
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opportunities, jobs
to large sections of the
society including
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society, including
professionals like painters, photographers, singers, cartoonists, musicians, models and people working in different advertising agencies.
This
means that the creative industry may reduce the unemployment rates and humans can reach prohibitively incomes to enhance living standards. In conclusion, on the whole, from my perspective, advertisements have both pros and cons.
However
, our society can benefit more merits from advertising in economic and social aspects.
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