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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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crime
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series
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 and
crime
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 tales are getting huge popularity in most countries nowadays. Because they are more interesting to watch and read;
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,
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 essay thinks that they are disgusting because of the nature of vandalism that has been portrayed in these books and
dramas
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. Felony
movies
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 and novels are interesting to watch and read because no one ever gets bored by watching and reading these two
types
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 of amusement in their free time.
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, when someone starts watching one episode of these
dramas
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, they will get addicted to it to finish the whole season as the
series
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 goes by the upcoming episodes will get more exciting, which has been the stem of popularity for these
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.
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, Prison Break, which is the most famous criminal drama has been watched by more than 2 billion people around the world. In my opinion, these
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 of
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 are quite annoying to watch at home with children because they impact the minds of youngsters in a negative way.
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, it propagates hatred among the adolescent generation, which can be attributed to the current vandalism in the United Kingdom
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 of watching these
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 of
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. though, many families nowadays cannot really control their children to not watch felony
movies
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 because they are addicted to these
movies
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.
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, a police investigation revealed
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 month that the spike in
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 in London City was a result of watching uncontrolled
crime
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series
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. In conclusion, felony
dramas
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 and novel books have become so popular nowadays, because of how appealing they are, and a huge number of people have become fun watching these
movies
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 since they never feel bored watching them.
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, it is really dangerous to watch these
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 of
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 as a family because it completely changes the minds of teenagers.

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task response
Try to avoid strong subjective words like 'disgusting' and 'annoying' unless they are adequately supported with more balanced explanations.
task response
More specific, tangible examples can improve the overall quality of arguments and help in illustrating points made. For example, discussing specific scenes or elements in 'Prison Break' that led to its popularity.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph starts with a clear topic sentence that previews its content.
coherence cohesion
The essay's structure includes an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, providing a clear organizational framework.
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The ideas are conveyed clearly, and the essay maintains relevance to the prompt throughout.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • phenomenon
  • intrigue
  • enigma
  • compelling
  • addictive
  • chilling
  • forensics
  • procedural
  • thriller
  • suspense
  • psychological
  • criminalistics
  • deviant
  • intricate
  • red herrings
  • misdirection
  • sardonically
  • socioeconomic
  • catharsis
  • moral ambiguity
  • multidimensional
  • protagonist
  • antagonist
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