In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
Television
crime
series
and crime
tales are getting huge popularity in most countries nowadays. Because they are more interesting to watch and read; however
, this
essay thinks that they are disgusting because of the nature of vandalism that has been portrayed in these books and dramas
.
Felony movies
and novels are interesting to watch and read because no one ever gets bored by watching and reading these two types
of amusement in their free time. Moreover
, when someone starts watching one episode of these dramas
, they will get addicted to it to finish the whole season as the series
goes by the upcoming episodes will get more exciting, which has been the stem of popularity for these dramas
. For example
, Prison Break, which is the most famous criminal drama has been watched by more than 2 billion people around the world.
In my opinion, these types
of dramas
are quite annoying to watch at home with children because they impact the minds of youngsters in a negative way. Additionally
, it propagates hatred among the adolescent generation, which can be attributed to the current vandalism in the United Kingdom as a result
of watching these types
of movies
. though, many families nowadays cannot really control their children to not watch felony movies
because they are addicted to these movies
. For instance
, a police investigation revealed last
month that the spike in crime
in London City was a result of watching uncontrolled crime
series
.
In conclusion, felony dramas
and novel books have become so popular nowadays, because of how appealing they are, and a huge number of people have become fun watching these movies
since they never feel bored watching them. However
, it is really dangerous to watch these types
of series
as a family because it completely changes the minds of teenagers.Submitted by am.edrees on
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task response
Try to avoid strong subjective words like 'disgusting' and 'annoying' unless they are adequately supported with more balanced explanations.
task response
More specific, tangible examples can improve the overall quality of arguments and help in illustrating points made. For example, discussing specific scenes or elements in 'Prison Break' that led to its popularity.
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coherence cohesion
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The ideas are conveyed clearly, and the essay maintains relevance to the prompt throughout.
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