In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is said that by some people that new modern

railways

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railway

systems for high-speed trains should be invested by governments, which links cities

together but

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together, but

others believe that existing public conveyance should be more priority than others on improving. I argue that both these views have many positive aspects which will be discussed below. On one hand, there are some justifiable reasons why people think that

authorities

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the authorities

need construct innovative

railways

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railway

lines.

Firstly

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, by setting up a traffic infrastructure serves for several modern vehicles

such

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as

bullet

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a bullet train

the bullet train

train

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, the subway

train

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and so on, a number of nations will address radically traffic congestion problems.

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, with developing of very fast

train

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model which is supported by advanced technology will attract many people utilizing

this

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vehicle because of

convinience

the state of being suitable or opportune

convenience

and quick features of them.

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, a bullet

train

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called Shinkanse in Japan can run at a speed of 300km/h, meaning that the Japanese may move between two cities separated by 100km in the less one

third

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hours.

On the other hand

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, I

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think that a number of

state

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states

-officials should spend more money on improving existing public transport system due to several reasons below.

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, in some countries,

this

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system is being used by a great deal of people and it would be difficult for authorities to change their habit

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of

utilizing current public vehicles, including buses, trains,

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

,..

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, the cost

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of

recovering public conveyance is cheaper than

buiding

a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place

building

new

railways

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railway

lines.

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, offering more qualitative road structures may help decline the use of private vehicles, leading to

reducing

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reduced

the large amount of CO2 emitted into

atmostphere

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the atmosphere

atmosphere

and improving air quality. In conclusion, it is undeniable that the improvement of existing public transport is

necessary but

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necessary, but

I think that the installation of high-speed railways is

also

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important in many nations.