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Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money. Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors. What are the reasons for this problem? How can it be solved?

It is a controversial question about whether students should be changed the
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 children in primary should be taught by
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 after
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 a good chance for students to improve adapting skills in different environments, which is extremely essential in their future higher education and occupation. In conclusion, being taught by
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