Some people say that history can teach us many important values and lessons, but others think it is unnecessary to learn from the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, it is
belived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
believe
that
history
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is very important and it can teach us many valuable things and lessons. While a lot of people think that it would be nothing to gain from learning about the past and I completely disagree with
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statement. On the one hand, there are some reasons why people do not need to learn from the past.
Firstly
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,
history
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is the field
that is
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rarely used in people’s lives,
therefore
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, they tend to pay attention to science and technology rather than focusing on something that brings no relevant values to the present or future.
Secondly
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, each
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history
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historical
events
now are interpreted
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are now interpreted
differently based on different facts and perspective so there is no
guarautee
give surety or assume responsibility
guarantee
guaranty
of the accuracy of the information obtained.
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, if
history
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documents were falsified, it would cause a tremendous damage to people’s culture and religion.
On the other hand
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,
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history
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the history
contained many valuable lessons that people can learn.
History
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helps young people understand the culture and how their country has evolved.
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, a lot of schools in Vietnam
has encouraged
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have encouraged
students to participate in
history
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classes. Youngsters need to know how their ancestors defended the nation against invaders throughout many dynasties and maintained the
peaceful
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peace
peacefulness
of
country
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the country
.
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would develop their patriotism and pride.
Moreover
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,
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depicts the mistakes made in the
past so
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past, so
this
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helps
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will help
people avoid the similar ones in the future. In conclusion, it is
obevious
easily perceived by the senses or grasped by the mind
obvious
that it would be nothing to gain when learning from the past.
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, it is undeniable that
history
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brings many important things and lessons that will be necessary for people.
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