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Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is a practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

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There is a popular belief that
third
 world countries need financial support from the international community, while others think that assistance as medical products, educational programs, and
consultancy
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Consultancy
 is more necessary. In my opinion, the help in the form of money shows less practical than other types of essential aid and advice. It is true that economic solutions take an enormous role in developing countries. With economic aid packages, governments can use them to enhance technology and invest in scientific and technical research to promote economic development and solve economic problems.
However
, not all countries utilize the external monetary flows
efficently
with efficiency; in an efficient manner
efficiently
, especially developing countries
beacause
for the reason that; on account of
because
 of
their poor quality in
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their poor quality
 infrastructure and labour force.
Besides
, there is a big risk of receiving a large amount of money from
developed
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developing
 nations since
third
 world countries do not have enough experience to use financial supports to the fullest.
This
 thing can easily lead to the terrible debt.
On the other hand
, I firmly believe that other forms of assistance are more needed. The explanation for my conviction is that society development makes economy develop, while poor countries have limited resources to tackle problems which are related to society, like education, health care, crime or unemployment.
Therefore
, making use of utilizing in specific solution in each field is the best way.
For instance
, experienced organizations can provide experts from all fields
to
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in
 developing nations to help them improve technology, develop education or solve social problems. With their useful advices and supports,
third
 world countries can
absord
become imbued
absorb
 more modern knowledge to advance expertise of human resources which play an important role as a core force in making society and
econmy
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the economy
economy
 better. In conclusion, I have a strong point that global help should come in
practial
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
 aid and advice.
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