Tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in the world. Millions of people today are travelling farther and farther. Some people argue that the development of tourism has had negative effects on local communities; others think that its influences are positive. What about your opinions?
We are living in the 21st century. Belong to the
development
of the transportation, the demand of travelling for many different aims is increasing higher and higher. Tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in the world
. Millions of people today are travelling farther and farther. Some people argue that the development
of tourism has had negative effects on local communities; others think that its influences are positive.
In my opinion, these effects are almost positive.
Firstly
, the development
of tourism helps our global connection become
tighter and tighter and it is Suggestion
connection to become
advisible
in the integrating time nowadays. Almost every worthy of being recommended or suggested; prudent or wise
advisable
countries
all over the Suggestion
country
world
are attaching their special importance to this
.
Secondly
, travelling can help people feel relax
after stress working days and they can Suggestion
relaxed
also
enrich their knowledge about other countries all over the world
. The farther and the more they travel, the more knowledge they can get. You can get many knowledge about culture
, science, sport,
Accept space
,
etc
of many countries, and you can apply some advanced science or studies intended to provide general knowledge and intellectual skills (rather than occupational or professional skills)
arts
culture
to your national development
.
Thirdly
, this
is a chance to every countries
in the Suggestion
country
world
introduce their special things such
as foods, historical destinations and their culture
. And it help
increasing not only the inspiration of tourists and make them Suggestion
helps
impressed but
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impressed, but
also
the pride of local people of their country. And it will attract more and more tourists not only in local but also
in foreign. From 2008, Phong Nha cave in Quang Binh province welcomes more and more tourists all over the world
thanks to the manage team
and local people get a huge impression to them.
What negativeness do you think? The local communities will decrease and bring bad influences to our country? No, it is totally Suggestion
teams
contrast
, it will bring more inspiration to everyone and it Suggestion
contrasted
make
higher the pride Suggestion
makes
to
our country, and the local communities will develop positively.
Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries in the Suggestion
of
in
world
. It is a good new. Tourism bring
everyone a big Suggestion
brings
inspriration
about arousal of the mind to special unusual activity or creativity
inspiration
culture
, science, etc. It make
the national pride in Suggestion
makes
everyone
bigger and bigger. The tourism develops, our Suggestion
every one
world
develops, for now and future.Submitted by Andy on
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