CYCLING IS MORE ENVIRONMENTALLY FRIENDLY THAN OTHER FORMS OF TRANSPORT. WHY IS IT NOT POPULAR IN MANY PLACES? AND HOW TO INCREASE ITS POPULARITY.

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Bicycles are one of the vehicles that does the least harm to the environment;

however

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, people using them are not as many as other vehicles. There are several reasons

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as its time consuming and

inconvenience

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inconvenient

. And there are

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some solutions to increase the number of cyclists on the route.

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with, there are several reasons why few people use bicycles by themselves. The

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disadvantage of cycling is that it takes a lot of time to ride a bicycle

instead

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of other vehicles to go on the same route.

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, the way to my company takes me about thirty-five minutes to go by

bike

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compared to twenty minutes to go by motorbike.

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, I have to arrange my time to go to work by

bike

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fifteen minutes earlier every day. The

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disadvantage of using bicycles is that it is inconvenient to go by bicycle. It takes up a lot of energy to ride; especially on hot days, it makes us extremely sweat in a suit.

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leads to our irritation during the rest of the day after that and our less concentration on tasks. Several effective solutions should be taken to increase the number of bicycle users. The

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solution is that the authority can encourage habitants by utilizing the sparkling image of a celebrity going out on a

bike

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to live a healthier life.

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may result in creating a good trend for the crowd especially the youth. The other solution merges from the project named “public bicycles”. There are fences of bicycles everywhere accessibly put in public for people to use. The authority

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builds a system of paths for

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riders to keep them safe.

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increases the habit of using bicycles more often, not only for exercising, but

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for a better living environment. In conclusion, there are some reasons why bicycles are becoming less common in today’s world, and solutions should be produced early to promote

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environmentally friendly means of transport.

AndySat Aug 15 2020

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CYCLING IS MORE ENVIRONMENTALLY FRIENDLY THAN OTHER FORMS OF TRANSPORT. WHY IS IT NOT POPULAR IN MANY PLACES? AND HOW TO INCREASE ITS POPULARITY.

Your opinion

Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?

Wild animals have no right in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that children at secondary school should be streamed, i.e. taught in classes according to ability, rather than being taught in mixed-ability classes. Do you think the advantages of streaming children at secondary school outweigh the disadvantages?

You work for an international company and you need some time off to attend a family celebration. Write a letter to the company’s manager. In your letter: give details of the celebration explain the reason why you need time off suggest a way to have your work done during that time.