According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourists in the 1960s and ’70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture. Why do you think this happens? How was tourism different in the past? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
There have been many changes in many fields, aspects in
industrialized and modernized era
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an industrialized and modernized era, such
an industrialized and modernized era such
such
as science and technology, politics,... especially
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Especially
tourism
, so it can not
be denied that it has the significant changes. According to an international travel magazine, many tourists are reported can not
cannot
to tend to fly
straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Suggestion
tend to fly
Furthermore
, they come back home without any experiences of the local culture
. This
essay will discuss about the reasons why this
actual state occurs and compare the diffences
of the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
differences
tourism
between now and in the past.
The reasons that contribute to this
actual state is countless but from my perspective, i I
think there are three main reasons. Suggestion
perspective, I
perspective, I I
Firstly
, people are too busy with their work, so they spend almost most of their time
concentrating on working, so their leisure time
is limited. Consequently
, that leads to stress, many and much pressure on their shoulders. They completely have no inspiration to be open to the local culture
, therefore
they just want to stay all day in a well – qualified hotels or resorts to relax in order to escape from the obession
with work and refresh their mind. an irrational motive for performing trivial or repetitive actions, even against your will
obsession
oppression
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,
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long, busy
year having
a holiday, we want a whole perfect one, so we don’t care about knowing the Accept comma addition
year, having
culture
, it is headachy
. Suggestion
a headache
headache
Secondly
, there are many temptations they can’t resist like
video games, chatting on Suggestion
liking
phone
, even despite their tiredness... Suggestion
the phone
a phone
phones
the
hotels Suggestion
The
also
donate play a small part. They supply all of their demand
and many servicesSuggestion
demands
:
swimming pool, sports field, massage, buffet... All of those prevent them from going out of the hotel. Accept space
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Thirdly
, due to the high development of science and technology, many electric devices were born like smart phones. Just with a click, the findings will display on the screen where they can learn about the local culture
each region whenever they want, so they don’t need to force themselves to learn while they are having such
a precious time
to enjoy their holiday.
That’s the tourism
today how about in the past? How was tourism
different? In 1960 and 1970, travel services were not as good as now, not many hotels or resorts, they were likely to stay in homestays
. They served themselves and stood a good chance to enrich their knowledge of every different local Suggestion
Homestays
culture
and the custom, tradition... At that time
, they didn’t access to the Internet, therefore
there were less temptations
, and they could pay attention to other things like contemplating spectacular sceneries, experienced new things that they Suggestion
a less temptation
less temptation
are were
curious about.
In conclusion, to solve Suggestion
are being
have been
this
problem i
I think the government should advise the enterprises to arrange the working refers to the speaker or writer
I
time
of their employees properly and make it more flexible so that not only they can have time
to relax but also
work more effectively. And also
encourage everyone to try not to use smart phone much otherwise
they will be stuck in virtual life. They need to go out to experience real things, learn about local culture
and they can realize its beauty and characteristics.Submitted by Andy on
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