Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

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There is no doubt that the importance learning
foreign
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a foreign language
foreign languages
language
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has increased dramatically in
past few decades
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the past few decades
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, the start period of learning a foreign
language
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has been argued among the researchers. While some experts feel that the children should start learning
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a non
-native
language
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as early as at primary
level
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, others think that it should be started at the secondary
level
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. I personally feel that there are more disadvantages of start learning the foreign
language
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at an early stage than its advantages. Let’s start looking at some of the disadvantages of early learning of a non-native
language
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. Many people believe that at secondary
level
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children are too young to learn any languages other than their mother
language
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is due to the fact that they are still in the process of learning their mother tongue and learning a
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language
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can
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result
in
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the overburden
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, some experts
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also feel
have also felt
are also feeling
that in the process of learning two languages simultaneously at
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early levels
an early level
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, children might end up with ‘jack of all master of none’ kind. So, they feel that kids should be focused only on their mother
language
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at primary school so that they can gain complete expertise in their native
language
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until they start learning a foreign
language
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at secondary
level
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.
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Another
segment of the society feels that the school children should start learning
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a non
-native
language
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at secondary
level
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is because children have more abilities of adoption and learning
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in
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the early stages
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is their learning period and they can learn quite easily and quickly at
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level
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, whatever they have been taught.
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, it has been proven that the children never forget the early lessons of life and the things which have been taught
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children are unforgettable for life time. All points considered, I strongly believe that the disadvantages of learning a foreign
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in terms of overburdening the children and not gaining the complete expertise in one
language
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at an early age outweigh the advantages of early
adaption
the act of accepting with approval; favorable reception
adoption
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