In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What types of changes are occurring? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?

Nowadays, the roles of each
members
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member
and the format of a family has altered considerably. The kinds of changes that are happening and my opinion on these changes are to be outlined below. Families have lots of
difference
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different
compared to the past, from the
family’s
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family
structure to the members’ duty.
Firstly
, there are nuclear families that act as an alternative for the traditional extended families, where there are only two parents and their children in
this
particular kind. An example of
this
idea is a law in China called ‘single child’ that forces each family to have only one child to reduce the astronomical population in
this
country.
Secondly
, previously, wives usually stayed at home to do the housework and take care of their children while the husbands were the breadwinners and have the income for the family. Nowadays,
however
, both parents work to have two different salaries and usually send their children to kindergartens so they have more time to do their jobs.
This
change is because of the desire for
higher qualities
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the higher qualities
of
life
that is
more pleasant and luxurious as in the past, most people did
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
jobs that were tiring and tedious. Personally, I believe that these changes grant human with more benefits than downsides. As for
nuclear family
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a nuclear family
the nuclear family
nuclear families
,
this
will help parents control and take care of their children more easily;
therefore
, their children could have better education that would help to prepare for their future
life
.
This
change in family structure will
also
make every family member understand each other better so they can help each other with difficulty.
Furthermore
, having both
parents working will
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working parents will
increase the family’s qualities of
life
and reduce the worry of struggling with financial problems.
This
shift in family roles, in a larger scale, will contribute to the countries’ economy and
hence
; significantly develop the countries in all aspects. In conclusion, I believe that changes in families are unavoidable due to the rapid change in lifestyle;
however
, these adjustments have proved to be very advantageous to
human
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humanity
in every
elements
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element
of
life
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Family structure
  • Modern family
  • Extended family
  • Nuclear family
  • Same-sex parent families
  • Breadwinner
  • Caregiving responsibilities
  • Family dynamics
  • Globalization
  • Economic shifts
  • Migration
  • Child-free lifestyles
  • Cohabitation
  • Traditional marriage
  • Perceptions
  • Homemaker
  • Communication
  • Shared activities
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