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In the past people believed that the human race was steadily making progress in all areas of life; nowadays there is less certainty that it is so. In what areas do you think the most important progress has been made so far? In what areas more needs to be done?

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As the time is changing, humans are evolving day by day and making each other’s life easier. People believe earlier humans used to make progress in every area of life, which now somehow has reduced.
Since
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For
past few years
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the past few years
, technology has tremendously advanced the world in every way. With the help of
this
, people have discovered phones, robots and other many useful machineries. Humans have slowly and steadily progressed in every way, whether it is banking sector,
defense
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
 or even making of satellites. Transportation and medication
has shown
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have shown
 a significant growth as compared to the previous years. With all these advancements they have improved their way of living and progressed in every sector of life.
Nevertheless
, there are many areas where
human race
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the human race
 is still lacking behind.
Therefore
, there are still many areas where the individuals have to shed light on. Issues like poverty, education and gender inequality are the major factors due to which they are making very little headway against many difficult odds. There are many countries where the percentage of crime, or food adulteration is very high and they still have to fight against it.
Therefore
, there are various domains which are ignored and still have to be worked upon. To conclude, humans have transformed themselves in many areas. As technology has played a vital role in the advancement of the human race, many other sectors are still forgotten. People should focus on the places where they are lacking and take certain measures to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 those gaps.
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