Gender discrimination has been completely eliminated in this modern world. Do you agree or disagree?

From

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the distant past

to present day,

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inequality has always been a controversial topic for debate. Some individuals argue that

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bias

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longer no existed

has no longer existed

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the present world

. From my perspective,

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the number of cases involving

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matter has considerably plummeted, to some extent, it is not totally eradicated. There is a myriad of reasons why there is a decline in

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imbalance. The

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and foremost argument is people’s high awareness and knowledge.

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, the proportion of well-educated residents

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thanks to the development in the education system.

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, more and more people having full awareness of the strengths of both sexes will combat sexism. Another idea worth mentioning is the modern women’s will to abolish

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bias. In comparison with women in the past who did not have a voice in almost significant matters in both family and politician, modern ones are ready to join fields which they rarely did.

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, the preceding president of

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the United Kingdom

is a woman known as Theresa May, which means that the position of leading a country, that has almost been responsible by men, now belongs to a woman.

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, it is inevitable that females in some parts of the world still have to suffer from

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prejudice. In some societies, the out-of-date idea of “Respect men, disrespect women” is still born in the mindset of a group of people, especially in Asian nations. As a consequence,

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can induce not only a sex imbalance in

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detrimental effects on the economy and society in the long run.

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, to the best of my knowledge, in some circumstances, Chinese married couples decide to have an abortion if the baby is predicted to be a female, which is partly contributed to the one-child policy of China. In conclusion, in my opinion, the present situation has been substantially progressed compared with it in the past;

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, it is fairly hard to suppress the gap between two sexes.

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, we have to recognize the remains of biases and challenges and work together for change.