: For some people, making a lot of money is an important goal. Others think that their free time is more important than wealth. Which is more important to you? Explain, giving specific reasons for your choice.

Although

it is argued that

money-making

the act of making money (and accumulating wealth)

moneymaking

is a significant aim, other individuals say that their spare

time

is more crucial. From my perspective, earning a lot of money gains dominance over my relaxing

time

.

This

essay will discuss some reasons and give my own examples to advocate my point of view. The

first

reason for

this

is the benefits I can reap from money-earning in the old life.

Firstly

, it is inevitable for me to enjoy a better life when I approach old

age

. I can use good

money which

Accept comma addition

money, which

is saved from hard-working when being young to make a living without dependence on my children. Another advantage is having more spare

time

to pursue my interest which I am unable to carry out at a young

age

. In my opinion, old

age

is the best

time

to develop a hobby since there are fewer considerable worries including my children, pressure from work, to name but a few.

For example

, my dream is

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

to as many famous places as possible;

therefore

when getting older, I have enough money and

time

to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

my passion. Another reason worth mentioning is the fact that I spent most of my childhood on

relaxation

Suggestion

relaxing

with my friends so when I reach young

age

, working hard without any spare

time

is not a regrettable decision for me. I feel like that the

time

I spent playing various folk games including marbles or flying kites with my

neighbors

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbours

satisfies me enough;

thus

when getting mature, I think it is high

time

for working not for wasting on recreational activities. In conclusion, from my viewpoint, making a profit should be considered to be more vital than free

time

due to two main above-mentioned reasons which are its benefits in old

age

and my spending of

time

in my childhood.