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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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It is true that many parents nowadays have participated in
cources
education imparted in a series of lessons or meetings
courses
 to learn parenting skills because of the essence of bringing up an offspring properly. In my own perspective, I completely agree with
this
 popular trend. There are some certain reasons why mothers and fathers ought to attend to these classes.
Firsly
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Firstly
, parents will know how narrow the generation gap between family members by taking several
lesson
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lessons
.
For instance
, they will be given a task to practice how to
anylise
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
 children’s
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, the result is that they can easily adapt their children’s characteristics and interests and built a strong relationship with them.
Secondly
, when parenting skills be mastered, the adults
can be focus
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can focus
can be focused
 on their career more. If their children have problems in physically or
mentality
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mentally
, it will
affected
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affect
 to parents’ productivity and concentration
in
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at
 work, which prevents them from meeting basic human needs. Offsprings
also
 be benefited from parents who
excellent
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excel
 in nurturing skills. Parents are very influential in shaping their sons or
daughters’
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daughter’s
 personality through the example that they set. Since patterns of
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 copied from parents often influence the way children grow up, the children’s trait
become
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becomes
 good or bad is mostly depend on the adults’ action. When children be listened and sympathized
by
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with
 their parents, it gives them countless opportunities to live happily. They can freely discover their passion and develop hidden
protential
existing in possibility
potential
potentials
,
as a
result they
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result, they
 can build their own successful careers in the future. In conclusion, it seems to me that parenting
cources
education imparted in a series of lessons or meetings
courses
coaches
 should be encouraged more in
this
 day and age.
Submitted by Andy on

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