Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is a natural phenomenon that women take utmost responsibility of their offspring than that of her husband, and
this
will not make them confine to upbringing their children. Linking Words
This
essay will agree to the fact that females should not be wholly responsible for their children Linking Words
instead
they should Linking Words
also
work and perform other duties as per their will and wish.
On the one hand, women are given equal importance to men, Linking Words
then
there is no point indulging themselves to the infant duty, they should opt to work as per their choice. Linking Words
Although
someone has to take care of the baby, the importance lies equally with both the parents. In Linking Words
this
modern era of equivalent opportunities there is no hindering to the progress of women, which in turn have positive attributes to the family as a whole.Linking Words
For instance
, children whose parents have jobs become independent right from the early age and can stand on their own with no major assistance from parents.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, Women who are involved in just baby responsibilities tend to get monotonous in their life and merely waste their life and education. Linking Words
Although
most of the educated women don't like to become housewives, but it is still a normality in many eastern countries. Linking Words
For instance
, it is noted that one tenth of the educated females is opting out of jobs after they give birth to their offsprings and involve in upbringing of kids. Linking Words
Although
Linking Words
this
is a minor ratio, but is alarming that Linking Words
this
factor is on the rise year on year. Women who are educated should not restrict to homes Linking Words
instead
they should make use of their learning for a better life involving themselves in their respective jobs.
To conclude, it is clear that women cannot not be restricted to baby care Linking Words
instead
females should be allowed to work and live progressively which can in turn help the upbringing of the kidLinking Words
Submitted by sreechin6571 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?