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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job. Others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In the 21st century, according to some people thinking university
education
 plays a major role in terms of getting a guaranteed
job yes
Accept comma addition
job, yes
 it is true, but some people think that it's better to do a
job
,
instead
 of getting a
degree
 and
then
 doing a
job
. Let's discuss
this
.
Firstly
, nowadays
education
 has played a major role in terms of developing our mindsets and these days one should be educated so that he or she can
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their dream. These day's it has become a trend that if you complete a
degree
 course from renowned collage-like " IIT, NIT, or some famous collage around the country you will get a guaranteed the best
job
 with a higher salary package. Through
education
 a person can get into different streams and can complete their
education
 in various streams like
for example
: - He or she can become a Doctor, Engineer or a Hotelier and by doing
this
 kind of course
degree
 from the university they get guaranteed a good
job
and
Suggestion
And
 it's true.
Secondly
, some people say that it is better to get into work
instead
 of doing a
degree
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 getting directly into a profession. According to some people's mindset, it's better to get more experience while doing a task so that they can start earning money at a very early age and
also
 they don't have to waste their time in doing their
degree
. Some people
also
 think that way, to waste too much money in doing a
degree
instead
 of directly get an office and earn money. To conclude, in my opinion, it's always better to do a
degree
 from a well-known university and
then
 getting a guaranteed work form a different company because study plays a major role in terms of developing people's mindset.
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