Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solution are there to solve this problem.?

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Global warming is one of the pressing problems that mankind is facing these days.

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essay will discuss the reason why it is occurring and make some suggestions about how

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problem can be tackled. There are several reasons that I believe can be attributed to the increase in global warming. The primary reason is the air pollution caused by public and private transportations. With the increasing number of cars, buses and bikes, the

green house

a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions

greenhouse

gases and

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emission

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are also increasing

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increasing.

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, the pollutants

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as carbon dioxide, methane, etc.

released

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by the automobiles contributes to the global warming. The

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reason is deforestation.

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, the cutting of trees lead to release of Carbon dioxide in

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the air

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is how deforestation and forest degradation contribute to global warming. There are two effective solutions to remedy

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challenging

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issue

. The most effective measure is reducing the utilisation of vehicles.

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, in India, to main the air quality of the city and to reduce the number of vehicles, an odd and even car rule was placed by the government.

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, as a way to resolve

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issue, the authority could make the law to protect the remaining forests and new schemes should be placed to promote

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the plantation

of new trees. The government should create incentives to advertise plantation.

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, in conclusion, minimizing the use of transportation and protecting the trees are successful solutions in dealing with

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issue. If government implemented these solutions, the problem can be reduced to a manageable level.

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Climate change
Earth's atmosphere
Carbon dioxide
Methane
Nitrous oxide
Emissions
Renewable energy
Energy efficiency
Afforestation
Carbon footprint

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solution are there to solve this problem.?

Your opinion

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