Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays, animal testing
are becoming
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is becoming
more and more well known and are used all over the
world
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. While some people think that it is wrong to use innocent animals for experiments, I believe that we can permit animal experiments thanks to its benefits
ands
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
right purposes On the one hand, there
are
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is
a wide range of bright sides that animal testing brings to our
world
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. There are some new medicines or drugs that have not been proved and used in
human
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humans, thus
humans thus
the human thus
thus
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testing those medicines on some kind of animals is a great remedy. By that, we can now
test
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the
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
and the safety of the new medicines so that people can easily use them without any risk or concerned.
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during the
world
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pandemic, COVID-19, thousand of scientists have been trying to find out a vaccine or medicine that can protect the people from the
killing
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killer
viruses, so that means there are a variety of animal experiments have been done to
test
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the new vaccines or medicines which is all in need at that moment.
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, we can
test
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animals which have similar genes with the human so that it helps scientists and
people broaden
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people, broaden
the horizon and learn more about the genes of the human and other species as well.
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, It is
also
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wrong doing
these
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these tests
test
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and should be banned for some reasons.
Firstly
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, It is considered to be cruel and brutal as it causes suffering to innocent animals or maybe can cost their life.
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, the results of these experiments may be wrong since the animals’ genes are not always the same with
ours so
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ours, so
that means some medicines or drugs is effectively used in animals but
can not
can not
cannot
work well and maybe can cause illness and disease to human. In conclusion, animal experiment is now common and used all over the
world
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so I think that we can permit these experiments depending on the seriousness of the situation and problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ethics
  • Morality
  • Vivisection
  • In vivo testing
  • Cruelty-free
  • Animal welfare
  • Biomedical research
  • Toxicology
  • Sentience
  • Compassionate
  • Humane
  • Speciesism
  • In vitro
  • Alternative methods
  • Pharmacology
  • Clinical trials
  • Bioethics
  • Animal rights
  • Pain threshold
  • Efficacy
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