Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?

People often claim that the area for head-to-head sports in both

team

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teams

or individual is not sufficiently enough, even

almost empty playground

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almost empty playgrounds

an almost empty playground

. While I disagree of their view, I have an approval for that curriculum existed in some schools. There is no doubt that sports activity plays an

intergral

existing as an essential constituent or characteristic

integral

in the physical and mental growth for anyone. It makes any

school

machineries should thoroughly express concern about it.

As a result

, at the time of rebuilding,

school

authorities often try to consist some sporting projects, which is adjacent to some

school

building, especially if theirs are located in a great ground,

such

as in the suburb,

school

managers and parents set out their plan to extend the yard and add up a new pool or fitness room for the benefit in playing of children.

Nonetheless

, it is certainly clear that students have many drawbacks to find places at

school places

Accept comma addition

school, places

at

school

for making games,

for example

, they

can not

can not

cannot

have enough

spaces

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space

or safety grounds to gather and playing after learning under pressure, because the main purpose in

school

yards is

using

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used

as the car park. Namely, it is obvious to see in some cosmopolitan cities, because of the abundant expanding of hotels, restaurants, it is hard to park cars. It

account

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accounts

for the choice to put the car in the

schoolground

, with the fact that it is very safety and

convenient

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convenience

conveniently

conveniences

. A

second

reason can be explained the disadvantages of students, by the lack of equipment. It is so far the preference to prepare more academic equipment, as a rule,

school

principals don't care for sport condition. As a consequence, it is unable for students to share a common interest about sports with their friends at

school

. In conclusion, it is obviously clear that

school

authorities have been putting effort to extend sports places for students, but there is no doubt that they should try your best to provide best condition for sport activities for

studen

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students

a student

t at

school