In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

Instance
food
price in all
arround
in the area or vicinity
around
round
the
world
is becoming very low and
take aways
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takeaways
have been
spreaded
distribute or disperse widely
spread
.
Although
, having
junk
food
is easier and cheaper, it
can be cause
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can cause
can be caused
to many communicable health issues.
Disscussing
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Discussing
these both ways are
valuble
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
.
First point
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The first point
of my view when talking about cheap
junk
food
and
take aways
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takeaways
increasing
arround
in the area or vicinity
around
all-round
round
the
world
is a waving hand to the communicable diseases
such
as
over weight
usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
overweight
,
diabatice
a polygenic disease characterized by abnormally high glucose levels in the blood; any of several metabolic disorders marked by excessive urination and persistent thirst
diabetes
, high cholesterol.
Furthermore
, I believe
,
Accept space
,
as a human any
people
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person
have
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has
an ability to cook something by themselves. When people are used to have
junk
food
for
long time
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a long time
it would be a reason to disappear their skill for cooking.It will badly
effects
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effect
some situations
such
as
world
wide pandemic.
For instance
, in the Corona pandemic period people in all
arround
in the area or vicinity
around
the
world
the
world
had to stay home for
long time
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a long time
and no way to
had
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have
fast
food
.
On the other hand
, there are few
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
can be seen having fast
food
, it means, any kind of people in the society can consume
junk
food
such
as the poor
also
can have something according to their budget.
Hence
, widely
spreaded
distribute or disperse widely
spread
junk
food
take
aways
from a particular thing or place or position
away
are
better
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the best
solution for the people who work in a tide
shedule
plan for an activity or event
schedule
in their
work places
a place where work is done
workplaces
. In conclusion,
junk
food
shops and low price
junk
food
are rapidly growing
world wide
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
.
Although
, they can be brought easier, they cause to bring many health problems in the society. Growth of fast
food
will be affected to the society very harmfully.
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