In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?
Instance
food
price in all arround
the in the area or vicinity
around
round
world
is becoming very low and take aways
have been Suggestion
takeaways
spreaded
. distribute or disperse widely
spread
Although
, having junk
food
is easier and cheaper, it can be cause
to many communicable health issues. Suggestion
can cause
can be caused
Disscussing
these both ways are Suggestion
Discussing
valuble
.
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
First point
of my view when talking about cheap Suggestion
The first point
junk
food
and take aways
increasing Suggestion
takeaways
arround
the in the area or vicinity
around
all-round
round
world
is a waving hand to the communicable diseases such
as over weight
, usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
overweight
diabatice
, high cholesterol. a polygenic disease characterized by abnormally high glucose levels in the blood; any of several metabolic disorders marked by excessive urination and persistent thirst
diabetes
Furthermore
, I believe ,
as a human any Accept space
,
people
Suggestion
person
have
an ability to cook something by themselves. When people are used to have Suggestion
has
junk
food
for long time
it would be a reason to disappear their skill for cooking.It will badly Suggestion
a long time
effects
some situations Suggestion
effect
such
as world
wide pandemic. For instance
, in the Corona pandemic period people in all arround
the in the area or vicinity
around
world
the world
had to stay home for long time
and no way to Suggestion
a long time
had
fast Suggestion
have
food
.
On the other hand
, there are few benifits
can be seen having fast financial assistance in time of need
benefits
food
, it means, any kind of people in the society can consume junk
food
such
as the poor also
can have something according to their budget.Hence
, widely spreaded
distribute or disperse widely
spread
junk
food
take aways
are from a particular thing or place or position
away
better
solution for the people who work in a tide Suggestion
the best
shedule
in their plan for an activity or event
schedule
work places
.
In conclusion, a place where work is done
workplaces
junk
food
shops and low price junk
food
are rapidly growing world wide
. involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
Although
, they can be brought easier, they cause to bring many health problems in the society. Growth of fast food
will be affected to the society very harmfully.Submitted by gayan1990227 on
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