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In the past when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have morw opportunity to study abroad. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Dear Mr. Jack, Hope you are doing great. I am
ABC
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an ABC
 and a professional
lower
a professional person authorized to practice law; conducts lawsuits or gives legal advice
lawyer
. I recently moved to your
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
. I joined your
gym
 for my daily exercise, I like your open space and well
equipenment
an instrumentality needed for an undertaking or to perform a service
equipment
 and you
also
 have some highly educate and professional trainers.
In addition
 to
this
, Your
gym
also
 has some of very important and expensive
gymmachines
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gym machines
. Which are very beneficial for beginners. My main reason
to
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for
in
of
 writing
this
leter
a written message addressed to a person or organization
letter
 to you is that
yourhas
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your has
al
quantifier; used with either mass or count nouns to indicate the whole number or amount of or every one of a class
all
 the modern
faciliuies
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
, But when
its
the thing named or in question
it
 comes to hygiene it has some issues. Which I want to inform you. I low many of
other mamber
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the other members
other members
other member
 of the
gym
 did not clean the machines and drop their dirty clothes around the
gym
equipenments
an instrumentality needed for an undertaking or to perform a service
equipments
. I would like to suggest if its possible you should encourage other people about cleaning and hygiene. I request you to kindly spread the awareness for cleanliness in
gym
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the gym
 so that hygiene can be maintained. Hope
this
 letter will
finds
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find
 you well and I look forward to hearing
form
a giver or sender
from
 you. Your sincerely, ABC.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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