There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear sir or madam,
My name is Leona and I am writing
this
letter to inform you that there is big
issue Add an article
a big
the big
of
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with
bus
service in my area Correct article usage
the bus
from
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for
last
two weeks. I am using your bus service Correct article usage
the last
from
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for
last
3 years to go to Correct article usage
the last
job
as well as for other trips but I am shocked Add an article
a job
the job
from
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for
last
some days because buses are delaying. I start my job in Correct article usage
the last
morning
at 7 but due to delay of Add an article
the morning
buses
I reach late which is putting bad impression on my job profile.
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,buses
Moreover
, sometimes buses drivers charge 2 dollars extra for fairs than regular fairs which are 4 dollars but they charge 6 dollars. Consequently
, it is affecting my monthly budget and I cannot afford extra charges. As a result
, your company is losing old customers and creating so many problems for our area.
In order to Add a missing verb
do that
that
you should focus on Add a comma
,that
this
matter and keep eyes
on drivers. In fact, you must inquire Fix the agreement mistake
eye
the
fairs and drivers who are charging more. It will be very helpful for me and for your company as well.
Yours sincerely,
LeonaChange preposition
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite