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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid any change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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A section of people enjoys following a constant routine, while there are others who believe in
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. I believe that it is always better to have a variation in the routine, as
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 is the only constant. In
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 essay, we will delve into both sides of the argument. The people who despise
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 state that over a period of time they grow comfortable performing the usual set of tasks. They like smooth pace of life and do not like to grow outside of their comfort zone.
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, the mundane routine because offers no new challenges, and there's no need to
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make fit for, or change to suit a new purpose
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 yourself with a new skill. Generally, the people with orthodox thought process belong to
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 category. The prefer diaries over computerised notepads, blueberry phone over touchscreens and libraries
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 of web novels.
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, there are people who accept
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 and are receptive to new ideas.
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 people like to constantly update themselves with new ideas and advancements happening all around the world. As compared to the elderly people, the younger generation falls into
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 category. They are welcoming to new technology, and try to learn one thing or another.
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, most of the old people are comfortable with the old phones, whereas the younger lot constantly update new softwares and technology.
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 behaviour is
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 reflected in the career choices they make, they are more eager to switch between jobs and
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 their career lines. To conclude, there are two categories of people, the
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 ones, who like to stick to their old ways, and the
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 ones who adapt themselves according to the
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. In my opinion, I think it is the need of the hour to adopt a flexible attitude and welcome changes in life with open arms, as
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 is the only constant. Only by doing
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, you can survive in
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 ever changing modern world of technological advancements.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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