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People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. what are the causes of this problem? How lo overcome il?

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It has become a challenge to make ends meet in
this
 stressful
life
. In times of so
much
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many
 people strive to strike a balance between their professional and personal lives.
However
, many fail to achieve
this
 because of
greater
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the great
work
 commitments.
Nonetheless
,
this
 can be solved if people
detremine
establish after a calculation, investigation, experiment, survey, or study
determine
determined
 to prioritise their personal
life
 as much their professional
life
.
To begin
 with,
work
 pressure hasn't been greater than what it is now. People are burdened with so many responsibilities, tasks and goals to achieve. Because of increased competitiveness, the employers
are set
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are setting
set
have set
 higher goal standards and to
chieve
to gain with effort
achieve
give
 those, they have to spend longer time at
work
, or they face the risk of being demoted or fired. And in today's fast paced world, you cannot afford it.
Hence
, people spend hours setting new benchmarks, to provide for their family, but end up neglecting
then
objective case of they
them
 the most. Not just
this
, the employer, focuses more on
work
achievement but
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achievement, but
 on the fact the number of hours spent in the company. He's considered more hard working and appreciated more. To solve these issues, emphasis should be laid on smart
work
instead
 of hard
work
.
Deadline
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The deadline
 can be given to the employers without increasing the working hours. The employers
also
, once they are out of the office, should not focus on any
work
 related discussions and spend more time with their family. In countries like,
Morway
a constitutional monarchy in northern Europe on the western side of the Scandinavian Peninsula; achieved independence from Sweden in 1905
Norway
 and Seden, the Government has made 4 days working to allow the employers and employees to focus on their
in
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on
 personal
life
 equally. In developing nations, people
work
 7 days a week.
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