Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a west of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
modern era, Linking Words
wrold
is changing a lot as compared to the past and today people everything that exists anywhere
world
mostly kills
wild animals for their enjoyment. But personally I believe that wild animals are the beautiful creation of the god and we must have to save them. In the following paragraphs, I have some strong arguments to support my view.
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will mostly kill
mostly kill
However
, humans are becoming selfish day by day and they think that Linking Words
this
world is only for them. Even though, they believe that, there is no space for other species on Linking Words
this
planet. But they forget that every coin has two sides "one is positive while another is negative". Because wild animals are the golden part of the nature and even in some points life cycle is Linking Words
next
to impossible without them. So it's our humble duty to protest their population. As per the 2017 government report, some Linking Words
african
countries major income only depends on the non-vegetarian animals. Because they a native or inhabitant of Africa
African
attracts
the Suggestion
attract
tourism
.
Suggestion
tourists
Moreover
, taking care of these animals requires huge amount of money and other lots of resources. Linking Words
For example
, In Linking Words
zoo lots
of security is necessary to avoid any incident. Even to take care of Accept comma addition
zoo, lots
animals
health every year government spend millions of Suggestion
animal
animals'
dollers
. Due to the basic monetary unit in many countries; equal to 100 cents
dollars
this
reason people think that it's Linking Words
batter
to invest money on development rather than something superior in quality or condition or effect
better
this
. One research of Linking Words
oxford
university shows that, still 65 percentage of people are not aware of the importance of other species.
To conclude, wild animals are very necessary for a university town in northern Mississippi; home of William Faulkner
Oxford
this
Linking Words
worls
. So if government everything that exists anywhere
world
works
use
more time and resources to save Suggestion
uses
tham
Accept comma addition
them, then
them then
then
it will be beneficial for the society as well as for the country and I have fully agreed with Linking Words
this
.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite