1. International travel is becoming coming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourist do the advantage of increased tourists outweigh disadvantages

Travelling is the important source of revenue for any country. It is said by some individuals that these

days many

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days, many

countries

have allowed

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are allowing

people to visit their nations for different purposes. In my perspective,

this

trend

has pros as well as cons and my viewpoints on

this

topic will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are various benefits of

this

trend

. When people travel to other

nations

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nations, then

then

they can explore other countries and they can

also

get

chance

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a chance

the chance

to know about the culture of other countries which widen their knowledge.

For instance

, a person named Abraham visited several countries because he wanted to make documentaries on different cultural activities of people and later on his name was recorded in the world record.

On the other hand

,

this

trend

has

also

some drawbacks. Sometime those people move to other nations who have

criminal record

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a criminal record

criminal records

and they hide themselves in new nations and in

this

way they can harm other countries and become more notorious criminals. Another con is that

this

trend

has encouraged foreign investment policy in which people of other nations can invest in different countries and

this

trend

has decreased the chances of sale of the products in other nations. To

recapitulate I

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recapitulate, I

would like to write that travelling gives opportunities to other people to travel

worldwide

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world wide

. I personally think that

advantages

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the advantages

of

this

tend out weighed disadvantages