You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to yur neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neigbhour to come

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Dear Ahmed, I am writing to you to introduce myself I am your opposite

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my name is Sarah currently I am working for a fire fighting company and I am an accountant. I and my family moved to live here a few weeks ago. We would to arrange a party on Friday from 4 PM to 12 AM to celebrate with our family and friends there will be activities, music, dances and lots of food

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, I arranged video games for the children and playground in the garden.

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, my sister graduated

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year so we would like to surprise her with a cake and presents if you like to give her a present. I am a little bit worried about the noise but I will control it as well I hope to understand

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situation it will be just 5 hours. We would like to invite you to join us at the party to introduce ourselves, have fun and

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relax from a demanding job. I hope you are coming with your family see you soon. Regards, Sarah

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Make sure to structure your letter in clear paragraphs, beginning with an introduction, followed by separate paragraphs for each main idea, and finally, a concluding paragraph.

coherence cohesion

Use a variety of cohesive devices to better link ideas and provide structure to your writing. This includes using conjunctions, referencing words, and transition signals effectively.

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To enhance task response, provide more detailed information about the party and how you plan to manage the noise. Furthermore, specifics about why you are worried and the measures you will take to mitigate disturbance can improve the response.

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While the tone is generally suitable, ensure your language is formal enough for someone you have not met before. Avoid overly casual phrases and provide politeness strategies that reflect your concern for the neighbor's comfort.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

181 words

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to yur neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neigbhour to come

some people think that government should spend money on faster public transportation, while others think there are other more important priorities such as healthcare and the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or a negative development?

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.