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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

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Overpopulation
 is
serious issue
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a serious issue
the serious issue
 of concern in developed and developing countries. It has lead to many other problems in the nations. I will elaborate my viewpoints in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with,
overpopulation
 has created the
problem
 of unemployment in the urban areas because of the migration of people from rural areas to urban areas in search of
job
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jobs
a job
.
Also
, many people have become
educated but
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educated, but
 they are not getting jobs so they are forced to work at low wages.
For instance
, in
India youngsters
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India, youngsters
 have become highly
qualified but
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qualified, but
 they are facing the
problem
 of unemployment because of the
problem
 of
overpopulation
.
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.
Moreover
,
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,
overpopulation
 has
also
 created the
problem
 of poverty
.
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.
 Many people are living below
poverty line
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the poverty line
 and unable to get the basic necessities of life
.
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.
On the other hand
,
government
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the government
 has suggested some precursors to solve these problems.
Government
Suggestion
The government
 should open some industries in the rural areas so that people of rural areas can get work
their
in or at that place
there
 and
can not
can not
cannot
 migrate
in
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into
 urban areas which will reduce the
problem
 of
overpopulation
 in the countries.
Furthermore
,
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,
 government should
also
 make some efforts to remove the
problem
 of poverty
.
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.
Government
Suggestion
The government
 should start
public distribution system
Suggestion
the public distribution system
a public distribution system
 in which wheat, flour and rice should be distributed on low prices to poor people. Poor people should be educated about family planning schemes in which they should be informed about family planning
.
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.
 To recapitulate, I would like to write that these problems can be solved
with
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by
 the joint efforts of people and government.
Submitted by raman on

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