Some people believe that it would be better if the whole family are involved in Bringing up children rather than only parents? What is your opinion.

Children are the future of any nations. It is important for all the people
to play
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play
an important role in the upbringing of children. It is said by some individuals that all the relatives should make some efforts in order to prepare children for
future
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the future
.In my perspective, all the
relatives
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relative
should involve themselves for the betterment of children and my viewpoints will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.
To begin
with, it is seen in modern societies that these days parents live in nuclear families and they are employed in full time job and they have less time to communicate with their children and
this
is the reason that they are involved in drugs , pornography and stealing and in order to save children from these activities it is better that parents should make some relationships with other relatives so that they can become better persons in their life.
Furthermore
, if children will
be be
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
taken care
by
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of
their aunts and uncle
then
they will get a chance to adapt them with other people and they will learn to adjust without their parents which will be really beneficial for them
.
Accept space
.
Another benefit is that when children will be taken care
by
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of
their
relatives
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relatives, then
then
there is possibility that they can acquire the basic qualities of their relatives which will help them to behave better in
socities
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
societies
. To recapitulate, I would like to write that parents must make healthy relationships with their relatives so that they can help them to
upbring
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appear
appearing
their children.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obey
  • authority
  • guidance
  • experience
  • knowledge
  • beneficial
  • harmful
  • mistakes
  • independent
  • critical thinking
  • creativity
  • problem-solving
  • responsibility
  • self-reliance
  • opinion
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