With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

Nowadays, places of natural beauty
is
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are
one of the
protective
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protected
areas in many countries. But many of them
in
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on
at
to
the brink of extinction due to the human habitation and industrialization. In many parts of the world, the situation is getting worse and worse. It is important to take steps in dealing with
this
issue. In
this
essay, I will give some solutions, and try to draw conclusions. One of the main benefits of natural spots is that they promote national pride and identity. Not all countries have natural beauty places.
In addition
to
this
,
there
of them or themselves
their
habitat some of rare species and plants. They can be used as country’s commons.
However
, estimation shows a decrease in spots and plants living there that impact destructively on
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
ecosystems
an ecosystem
. A solution is for
government
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the government
governments
to exert efforts and make a strategy, which will lead to saving the habitation. On the one hand, natural places have
medical
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medicinal
properties, especially their fertile grass and clear water. Many people visit
this places
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this place
these places
to heal backbone or inner disorders. It really helps
to
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with
them. A good example of
this
would be The National Park of Kazakhstan in Nur-Sultan. Every year around 100.000 people visit
this
natural place to get medical therapies, but it damages to the nature. A vast mass of people
do not care
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does not care
about
environment
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the environment
and keep on littering. To tackle
this
problem people should start to protect the land. As a
results
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result
, many countries will preserve natural spots from overgrazing.
Finally
, most of natural beauties have amount of trees that help us to prevent global warming. What I mean by
this
is that
emission
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emissions
the emission
of greenhouse gases
are increasing
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is increasing
every year, prompting the climate change in the world. It is the most dangerous problem over the
last
few decades. But
growing population
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the growing population
need
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needs
more agricultural lands. The look forward might be to cease wasting
consumption water
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consumption, water
and nutrition, which can help to use the land in
appropriate way
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an appropriate way
appropriate ways
the appropriate way
. All in all, urbanization and industrialization is one of the main causes of losing spots. Unless the humanity estimate and value the motherland, the situation will
worse
grow worse
worsen
. It
can be have
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can have
terrific consequences. Personally, I believe that we are able to prohibit our nature for future generation.
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