Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The society is dealing with criminal problems these days.

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, it is generally believed that inborn characteristics are the reasons leading to crimes.

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, in my own opinion, I would argue that

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is the result of social conditions. There is a belief of committing crimes is because of a person’s nature.

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, cruel people find it easy to commit

crime

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, children who used to bully other boys or girls at school at their young age often become violent later in life.

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, bad characteristics in some

people including

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people, including

laziness and greediness could

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build up an offender in the near future. Some of those people, especially youngsters, tend to prefer stealing from other people the thing they want

to working

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to work

hard to get it. As a

consequense

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

consequence

, people who have bad personalities are more likely to be accused of crimes.

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, I still support the opinion that social problems are the cause of

crime

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of all, there are a number of issues in society which could lead to crimes.

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, an increase of unemployment rate in the community makes people feel harder and more exhausted to live because of not having a main

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the place where something begins, where it springs into being

source

sources

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of money to pay for their needs. As the result, they have to steal or rob others to support their standard of living.

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, poverty can

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the reason of

crime

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. Since their living conditions could not meet their basic needs, these people might have to force themselves to do

illigal

prohibited by law or by official or accepted rules

illegal

activities which could make more money for their livings and family. In conclusion, while some people argue that

crime

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is the

consequense

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

consequence

of bad nature of some individuals, I still believe that social issues and poverty are the primary cause of criminal problems.