Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
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others opine that all the cost attached to Accept space
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college
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it is true that there are some compelling reasons why students should be allowed to pursue Accept space
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without fee
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people coming from lower socioeconomic backgroundSuggestion
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may stand a better chance of landing higher paid jobs and bettering their life qualityAccept space
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find their lives hard to make ends meetat all times; all the time and on every occasion
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study
fees, will have a golden chance to Suggestion
student
enroll
in university without worrying about financial termsregister formally as a participant or member
enrol
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Secondly
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enrollment
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enrolment
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fostered by a free - Accept space
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would give a rise to a more educated workforceAccept space
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leading to not only a thriving economyAccept space
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a civilized society .
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despite aforementioned benefitsAccept space
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policy may wreak havoc on both society and government .
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if the provision of free - of - charge higher education is appliedAccept space
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the authorities will have to incur to a huge amount of money paying for universities for the purposes of paying salary for tutorsAccept space
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maintaining the condition of infrastructureAccept space
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lead to budget deficitsSuggestion
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tax hikes or abating welfare among others.Accept space
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it would impede the ability of seeking jobs. That meansAccept space
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when everyone all has their university diploma so it is hard for recruiters to distinguish who is the better candidateAccept space
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students, who are academically excellentAccept space
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can take advantage of their diploma to get a job more easily.
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both ideas have their own pros and consAccept space
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college
fee
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this
problem more seriously rather than have this
debate reignited in order to make the suitable final decision .
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