The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Indeed, the position of women in society

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undergone a dramatic change in the past two decades and the majority of them continue working once they get married.

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, some people indict mothers and their careers for young people’s struggle and misconduct. Personally, I strongly disagree.

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essay will argue that rise in youth crime is a result of lack of education and unevenly shared parental responsibilities, rather than professional married women. In

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ever-competitive, modern era, father’s earning is not enough to have normal living standard.

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is why mothers step up and work hard to pay their children’s tuition to give them the best education they need to have a bright future.

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, an extensive study by Oxford university indicates that youngsters commit more crimes when they are not attached to the schools and have no career vision.

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, it is conclusively clear that mothers are actually contributing to make their children more focused on learning and stay away from mischiefs. Despite mother’s best efforts, many people still think that working women are no longer placing family as their priority these days as they are busy working. In fact, by doing

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, they contribute significantly to the house budget so that fathers don't necessarily have to work overtime and spend more time at home with children.

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, recent empirical research by the UK government demonstrated that adolescents will be significantly less prone to wrongdoing, if they have a

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father

figure to look up to.

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, it is hard to agree with the notion that professional mothers are the reason for youngster’s distress and misbehaviour when fathers are often absent from contribution to child upbringing. To conclude, I believe that a career woman is not a factor for the increasing level of juvenile delinquency. As the matter of fact, fathers should come forward and share responsibilities and both parents should make sure that their children are converged in education.