Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers? What the cause of this? Solutions?

Use of technological gadgets is in the important section of the
society
is
continuously
seemingly without interruption
continually
on the increase. Some people advocate that old generation in the
society
wrestle
Suggestion
wrestles
with
this
facility like usage of telephones and internet.
This
essay delineates the causative factors and the methods to alleviate them. The most prominent reason is that the lack of knowledge about the modern systems and the facilities because since their childhood they does not get any facilities like
this
also
does not even use it. They no proper aware about
this
while in some cases educated seniors in the
society
note struggle with
this
section but majority of them on the other side. Another important
couse
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
cause
for
this
issue is that the older ones in the
society
are not willing to accept the
modern easy
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modern, easy
ways even if they have the facilities to learn about
this
at
Suggestion
in
their own home. It
is depend
Suggestion
depends
upon the individual character. In
fact they
Accept comma addition
fact, they
believe nothing could be done after a certain age. Display to having a lack of the
defficiency
the ratio of the output to the input of any system
efficiency
in the usage of
improved system
Suggestion
an improved system
improved systems
.
for
Suggestion
For
example a study from china week that the multi speciality services provided by the bank is completely scuffle the old ones. As
regardas
Suggestion
regards as
regard as
the
first
cause the insufficiency
off
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
knowledge about the technologies among the
elderlyyperson
can be easily abated by imparting an effective
awarenes
having knowledge of
awareness
program teaching how use the advanced systems in their daily life and make it as possible for them. Thinking about the
second
reason not acceptable garage roof geriatric could
curtailed
Suggestion
curtail
through the awareness programme.
However
the age related disability among
yhe
definite article
the
pensioners can effect all
this but
Accept comma addition
this, but
it
can be reduce
Suggestion
can reduce
can be reduced
the
swedge
any shape that is triangular in cross section
wedge
of them. Conclusively
practing
a customary way of operation or behavior
practicing
protecting
the affirmative methods could be effectively
resolve
Suggestion
resolved
this
problem. It is hoped that the statutory body would immediately take
necessary actoions
Suggestion
the necessary actions
necessary actions
necessary action
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