You are starting a new business and need to build a website. You have a friend who works for an IT company who you want to help you. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • describe your new business • ask your friend to help you build the website • say how you will thank your friend for his/her help.

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Dear Tasmina, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I had received your letter and it is always great to hear from you. I am writing

this

letter to ask for your expertise in creating a website for my new venture. As you know I am trying to instigate a textile profession and since everything is advancing to an online market so I thought of creating one. Basically, my business is about casual and formal wear for men, women and children.

Although

there is tons of competition out there at the moment,

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I am focusing more on premium quality, hand-made , luxurious brands. I was scouring for the best

web-designer

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and I could not think of anyone except you. I have seen your work and it's amazing how exquisite and enchanting your projects are, and plus you have years of experience in

this

field.

Therefore

, I am hoping that you shall assist me in designing a website for my company.

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is a tedious job and it takes months of planning to build one and since you would be investing your time and energy on

this

project, I insist on paying for it. I know that you will resist, but I insist, it is the least I could do. I hope you would help me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Take care. Best regards, Shakib

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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