IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5

Some people think that planning for future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #future #waste #time #focus
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
It is true that people tend to worry about the
future
Use synonyms
. While focusing
on the
Accept comma addition
on, the
 reality is very important, I believe that planning for the
future
Use synonyms
 is of greater importance. There are several reasons why people should live in the present. The main reason is that numerous problems in modern life may prevent individuals from having the luxury to
plan
Use synonyms
 for the
future
Use synonyms
. Each problem which is one of a kind usually takes time and effort to deal with. Take many young people these days as an example. Most of them have a hectic lifestyle and usually encounter numerous
difficulties including
Accept comma addition
difficulties, including
 financial burdens and pressure at work.
Therefore
Linking Words
, it makes no sense to neglect these existing problems to think about the
future
Use synonyms
. Despite the valid argument mentioned above, I believe that having goals for the upcoming years plays a more important role in people’s lives.
Future
Use synonyms
 planning helps planners to dictate their actions so that they could motivate themselves to work their ways toward goals. When people make a
future
Use synonyms
plan
Use synonyms
, they can reasonably allocate time slots for each task. They will know exactly what they should do at a certain time and easily make their
future
Use synonyms
 goals achievable, which means their efforts will surely pay off.
For example
Linking Words
, students who have a thorough study
plan
Use synonyms
 for final exams tend to get better results than others in their class. In conclusion, I believe that making a
plan
Use synonyms
 for
Use synonyms
future
Suggestion
the future
 is more important than living in the present. It is
therefore
Linking Words
 important that after making a
plan
Use synonyms
 for the times ahead, people should follow it and make it
reality
Suggestion
a reality
.
Submitted by Andy on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: