MrS Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, ' has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Bassett,
I hope you are fit as a fiddle and delightful. I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in the advertisement that you have posted in the local newspaper. Since my childhood, I helped my mother with all the house chores, therefore
I am fully aware of the tasks. It would be my pleasure to help you with cleaning the house, preparing food, and washing clothes. and so on.
The two main reasons for my excitement about doing this
job are my pets and my needs. You mentioned in the post that you have two pet cats and my favourite animal is the cat. Also
, I need to collect some my for my tuition fees as it is very hard for international students to gather money.
Next summer, the summer break has been approved by my college. That time will be a suitable time for me to save and earn money, therefore
I have decided to do two jobs. According to
my schedule, I will present for You almost every day from 3pm to 8pm, unfortunately
I might take off for 2-3 days Add a comma
unfortunately,
due to
my assignments which will be assigned by my university. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Upinder KaurSubmitted by upinder7696 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure all ideas are clearly separated into distinct paragraphs for easy readability.
task achievement
Be cautious with typos and small grammatical errors, like 'my' instead of 'money'.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and friendly tone throughout.
coherence cohesion
The structure is logical and follows a clear sequence of introduction, main content, and conclusion.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite