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Many big cities in Vietnam are facing air pollution now. What we should do to solve this problem?

#cities #vietnam #air #pollution
Most of modern cities in
Vietnam where
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Vietnam, where
 everything goes mechanised and rate of population is so high have poor AQIs, especially in Hanoi. Bad atmosphere
do
Suggestion
does
 harm to city dwellers' health and cause lots of advantages as it results in climate change. To solve
this
 problem, I think all of us have to change our bad daily habits that make the air state lower and lower.
Firstly
, changing from private vehicles (car and motorbike) to public ones like bus or non-fuel ones like bike is highly recommended. According to statistics, transportation emissions are top air-pollutants, so cut down on diesel and petrol vehicles definitely works. But in Vietnam, a traffic
tradition so-called
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tradition, so-called
 "motorbike tradition" which have surprised every
foreigners
Suggestion
foreigner
 coming here is hard to break but it worths.
Secondly
, many people always litter and even burn the bag of
gabbage
food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)
garbage
cabbage
, dried leaves
adn
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
nilon
a thermoplastic polyamide; a family of strong resilient synthetic fibers
nylon
 bag sometimes, which creates smell and toxic gases. Someone might suggest a fine for
this
 action if detected, but I'm totally against that. In reality,
an
Suggestion
a
 small fine is not enough to stop them litter and burn household waste.
Instead
, we should make the littered areas more beautiful by decorating and planting flowers. I suggest the funny draws and trendy flowers, daisy
for example
.
This
 will conjure a sense of
beauty respect
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beauty, respect
 that we don't want to destroy those
gorgoeus
dazzlingly beautiful
gorgeous
 areas and stop litter there. Our harmful environmentally habits
such
 as using diesel and petrol vehicles and litters and burning things are ruining the main source of our lives, but habit can be
break
Suggestion
broken
. Think and act for the air!
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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