Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, newspaper and television are considered to be traditional
information
source. Unfortunately, these days they lack their popularity for youths, who are less interested in these types of media. In
this
essay, I will explain the reasons behind
this
problem as well as some solutions that can be taken to solve it. As it’s widely known from ancient ages, you’re there where your attention is. So, a lot of young people chose to avoid traditional sources of
information
and attached their points of interest to computer screens and mobile devices. You do not need to wait for every-hour news on TV anymore, but now you can get
this
news any time and from different points of view.
This
way news are not so interesting any more, because you’re not waiting for it with some attention, and your people are selecting more thematic materials related to their hobbies, art, music or even computer games. The only way, I can imagine in attracting young people back into the world's news flow, is making news available via Internet in a very nice format without advertisement ads but with quality content. Older generations
also
can try to share benefits of traditional newspapers versus the electronic format of news, but there is few only available, like you can read it offline without electricity and make your eyes more relaxed.
In other words
, we can conclude that electronic mass media already won the battle for young brains and new generation is definitely choosing Internet versus TV. Anyway, it's still quite common to exchange info regarding main news via any available channels.
This
way the electronic version of a newspaper may be used as a proven source of
information
and shared by teenagers to their friends easily. If news agencies will keep working hard on providing actual
information
and create high attractive news brand for youngsters
then
they will follow it.
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